by The Scrawling Saint » Thu Apr 22, 2010 10:27 pm
Hmm, it looks to me like a brave first step into realism. *wink*
I'll suggest a few things for the future~
>Work on making noses more curved, larger, and lower. Drawing them slightly to the side helps with this.
>Make your lips a little bit fuller unless thin lips are a part of the character, and extend the mouth a small bti to either side of them by adding faint lines.
>The eyes should be just a little smaller, and that the entire eye shape isn't all eye itself. cut off the edges to create a circle/oval within the shape and draw your iris and whatnot inside that.
>Finally, when drawing your new and improved eyes, draw faint lines down their inner edges and down into the nose. This makes the face flow much better and created more of a natural, human effect.
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